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Listen
It hurts when
God gives you a voice
But it's not permitted
to be heard
By those who
matter in our lives
Some people will
never learn to listen
It seems they haven't
got it in them
That's got to be
the saddest thing
Because it never
hurts to listen
God gives you a voice
But it's not permitted
to be heard
By those who
matter in our lives
Some people will
never learn to listen
It seems they haven't
got it in them
That's got to be
the saddest thing
Because it never
hurts to listen
Published 27th Mar 2024
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27th Mar 2024 12:20pm
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27th Mar 2024 10:47pm
A poignant reflection on the pain of having a voice that goes unheard by those who matter in our lives. your poem conveys a longing for genuine listening and the impact it can have on our relationships and well-being.
30th Mar 2024 3:54pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks, my friend. They are deeply appreciated.
Faith
Faith
29th Mar 2024 3:51am
Dear F,
Touching write. Heartbreaking in most circumstances to me, as the voices unheard tend to be the innocent. Beautifully insightful. H🌷
Touching write. Heartbreaking in most circumstances to me, as the voices unheard tend to be the innocent. Beautifully insightful. H🌷
30th Mar 2024 3:56pm
Dear H,
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I always love hearing from you!
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I always love hearing from you!
29th Mar 2024 10:42pm
It is really a nice... and peaceful poem
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So let's keep on listening ... and writing poetry.
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So let's keep on listening ... and writing poetry.
29th Mar 2024 11:07pm
30th Mar 2024 2:20pm
