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I Will Always Love You

The advent of night
Under the weeping moon
The twilight is her robe
Silent waters trickle down
Through the forest in autumn
Silhouette in the mist
A cold hand reaches out
Darkness encloses
Requiem
I bid you farewell, my love

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 21st Mar 2024

#death #love #nature #night

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Re. I Will Always Love You

Thor_Azine

21st Mar 2024 10:39am

I don't want this to at all sound patronizing, that's not my intention but this poem reads like I could have wrote it. It made me feel like I was reading my own poetry which was kind of a cool experience.

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Vision_of_insanity

21st Mar 2024 10:42am

No patronizing. I understand. There are some similarities at times to our writings. I've noticed a few of yours I though the same. All good.
Appreciate the feedback.