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The Orchid Garden
A kaleidiscope of colourful things
That filled the air with splendour
Delivered to the eyes on butterfly wings
On an orchid garden meandor
There were paradise birds
And beautiful flowers
And plants that were wonderfully extreme
There were antelope herds
And weather tight bowers
And the world was a beautiful dream
As all around
I stood spellbound
With not so much as a "beg your pardon"
A sweet trilling sound
That was rarely found
Was there to see, in the orchid garden
by Jemia
That filled the air with splendour
Delivered to the eyes on butterfly wings
On an orchid garden meandor
There were paradise birds
And beautiful flowers
And plants that were wonderfully extreme
There were antelope herds
And weather tight bowers
And the world was a beautiful dream
As all around
I stood spellbound
With not so much as a "beg your pardon"
A sweet trilling sound
That was rarely found
Was there to see, in the orchid garden
by Jemia
Published 20th Mar 2024
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29th Mar 2024 12:36pm
This poem beautifully captures the enchanting atmosphere of an orchid garden, painting a vivid picture of vibrant colors, exotic flora and fauna, and a sense of wonderment. The imagery evokes a feeling of being transported to a magical realm, where every sight and sound is a delight to behold. The use of rhyme and rhythm adds to the lyrical quality of the poem, making it a joy to read aloud. Overall, it's a delightful piece that celebrates the beauty and splendor of nature's creations.
