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our first meeting
our first
meeting,
by chance,
was a hot
communication,
for each
question
i asked,
she held
the answers
i needed,
a night
of carnal
desires,
sweat,
ideas
worked out
between us,
come morning
we each
went our
separate way.
meeting,
by chance,
was a hot
communication,
for each
question
i asked,
she held
the answers
i needed,
a night
of carnal
desires,
sweat,
ideas
worked out
between us,
come morning
we each
went our
separate way.
Published 16th Mar 2024
Author's Note
just thoughts of what may have been a one night stand
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- Edited 7th Apr 2024 6:45am
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16th Mar 2024 6:52pm
17th Mar 2024 2:33am
I like this. Minimalist which works quite well with what you're trying to so successfully to do. Every word contributes to the overall effect and the ending is perfection. So many of us have been there and so can relate. Well done.
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