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bad dreams
stalked,
those tremors
prepared
the nights
through
sleep,
bad dreams
lay thick
bare pinnacle
shallow
breathing,
shaking in
the thin
air.
.
those tremors
prepared
the nights
through
sleep,
bad dreams
lay thick
bare pinnacle
shallow
breathing,
shaking in
the thin
air.
.
Published 14th Mar 2024
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14th Mar 2024 10:31am
Nothing bothers a restful sleep like being chased by a nightmare. Nice poetry here.
14th Mar 2024 10:33am
17th Mar 2024 2:50am
The shape of the poem itself reminds me of a dagger of sorts, so it's both verbal and visual.
17th Mar 2024 4:31am
