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exotic
how
many times
have i
thought
of her
pictured,
we stroll
together
in
the garden,
elements
of gold
looking from
above,
i feared
missing her,
she wore
a new dress,
you and i
are not
forbidden,
slowly
this all
comes together.
many times
have i
thought
of her
pictured,
we stroll
together
in
the garden,
elements
of gold
looking from
above,
i feared
missing her,
she wore
a new dress,
you and i
are not
forbidden,
slowly
this all
comes together.
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Re. exotic
12th Mar 2024 7:56am
Dear J,
You continue to write in such an elevated style. Always with such class. Beautiful piece. H🌷
You continue to write in such an elevated style. Always with such class. Beautiful piece. H🌷
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12th Mar 2024 8:38am
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13th Mar 2024 3:04am
And I hope you took some photos of this beautiful scene... not that you had to because I pictured it perfectly! 😊
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Anonymous
16th Mar 2024 2:31pm
Sun gilded loveliness here
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17th Mar 2024 2:54am
Now one really fine poem would be a treat. Two a lovely gift. But, jeez-louise, you are like the Energizer Poet. You just keep pounding that drum. I, for one, am loving it. Good work, my friend.
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