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Eloi, Eloi, lama sabachthani

 
my love revolves around your passion
I submit to your prowess within my blush
that deepens every time you gaze at me

piercing my innocence
claiming me as yours
I connect with you soul to soul
you are my god and lover

titillating my hurt
I think to turn away
but you gather the stars in my eyes
turning me to you once more

secreted lusts are understood
as every scenario is played about upon my flesh
and you get the desired response from me

I idolize you
there is none above you on my heart's altar
I lie prostrate in front of you
in reverence for your dominance

confessing my pain
speaking my need
and just that easy you heal my sorrow




Written by crimsin (Unveiling)
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