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Too...damaged
In truth my heart is too damaged to love anyone properly , much like a deranged killer who can't help but kill the things they love I can't seem to not abuse the ones who get close to me as if they deserve to be punished for loving me.
Published 3rd Mar 2024
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3rd Mar 2024 6:14am
Dear TK,
Your poem had me thinking about my own damage and how I could possibly tidy it up. I really appreciated the example of the serial killer. A very effective metaphor. The isolation along side the loneliness in this piece is very well depicted. Excellent writing.
H🌷
Your poem had me thinking about my own damage and how I could possibly tidy it up. I really appreciated the example of the serial killer. A very effective metaphor. The isolation along side the loneliness in this piece is very well depicted. Excellent writing.
H🌷
16th Mar 2024 10:16am
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