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The Reaper
Manifestation of suffering
death imminent
devouring life
cultivate my soul
wielding your scythe
your unbiassed role
come now reaper
no martyr here
meet in the flame
present to me
not afraid
not meant to flee
following
phosphorescent eyes
mortality pending
guidance required
prepared to depart
this life uninspired
death imminent
devouring life
cultivate my soul
wielding your scythe
your unbiassed role
come now reaper
no martyr here
meet in the flame
present to me
not afraid
not meant to flee
following
phosphorescent eyes
mortality pending
guidance required
prepared to depart
this life uninspired
Published 23rd Feb 2024
Author's Note
I had a bit of a difficult year. I wrote this awhile ago. My mindset at the time.
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23rd Feb 2024 7:41am
Dear M,
The reader can feel the unsettled thoughts throughout the write. This piece, for me, is such an excellent presentation of feeling done, with everything. Very relatable write. H🌷
The reader can feel the unsettled thoughts throughout the write. This piece, for me, is such an excellent presentation of feeling done, with everything. Very relatable write. H🌷
23rd Feb 2024 9:02am
Dear H,
Thank you very much. Unsettled for sure. I appreciate that it was relatable for you and yes, was written at a definite “I give up” moment. Grateful for your feedback and the read🙏
Bless
Mel
Thank you very much. Unsettled for sure. I appreciate that it was relatable for you and yes, was written at a definite “I give up” moment. Grateful for your feedback and the read🙏
Bless
Mel
23rd Feb 2024 11:33am
I'm glad you're here. Chilling and relatable poem, I liked the structure and word choices.
23rd Feb 2024 4:07pm
