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Weird
so awkward, I come to you
I wonder can you see me?
pale of faith
a weird girl
odd in fascination
do you know me?
you're so fucking special
I am a nobody
coming from emptiness
but feeling too much
my loneliness craves you
stoic with your need
I don't know what you desire
still with a ferocity I come from the shadows
giving you my vulnerability
just a strange girl coveting your touch
I sit in your silence and drink my fill
it's your ego that sustains me
captivates my passions
and puts my wants to rest
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7th Feb 2024 4:15am
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7th Feb 2024 4:08pm
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7th Feb 2024 10:15am
I agree. That last line was the icing on the cake. Excellent poem.
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7th Feb 2024 10:33am
“Coming from emptiness but feeling too much…”
This said it all. Powerful, emotive inking!
This said it all. Powerful, emotive inking!
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7th Feb 2024 4:09pm
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7th Feb 2024 12:02pm
You've captured a vulnerability in this that is amazing to feel in reading it. I found it beautiful.
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7th Feb 2024 7:39pm
Very revealing poem. Just my kind of love pouring onto the page from the pen tip.
Richard
Richard
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