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Can I Leave You......Breathless
I want to leave you........breathless
It's what a “man” should do when he's making love to you
the realization of your most intimate, inner most pleasures
you and I tied all up together
in the throes of a deep “release”
your body wrapped up
in a mass of
jostled, moist, warm sheets
panties on the floor, at your feet
Your reply, the deepest sigh
Our lips sealed in a kiss.........lustfully erotic
your sensual desires satisfied
Shall I no longer exist? (all but a vapor in this most illicit caper)
“I'd love to make you wet
In between your thighs, 'cause
I love when it comes inside you
I get so excited when I'm around you......”
the sash thrown open
and a warm breeze blowing in
I am in awe of your arousal
so magical
I stand before your naked body
“I” am naked, soul to soul
ready to “breathe” you once again baby
“I want to take the walls down with you......” 🔥🔥🔥
It's what a “man” should do when he's making love to you
the realization of your most intimate, inner most pleasures
you and I tied all up together
in the throes of a deep “release”
your body wrapped up
in a mass of
jostled, moist, warm sheets
panties on the floor, at your feet
Your reply, the deepest sigh
Our lips sealed in a kiss.........lustfully erotic
your sensual desires satisfied
Shall I no longer exist? (all but a vapor in this most illicit caper)
“I'd love to make you wet
In between your thighs, 'cause
I love when it comes inside you
I get so excited when I'm around you......”
the sash thrown open
and a warm breeze blowing in
I am in awe of your arousal
so magical
I stand before your naked body
“I” am naked, soul to soul
ready to “breathe” you once again baby
“I want to take the walls down with you......” 🔥🔥🔥
Published 15th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Thank you D'Angelo for the morning inspiration and nature for the sensual setting #summerbreeze 🌬️
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15th Jan 2024 6:09am
Favourite verses:
No words are said just flesh to flesh in this steamy place,
Exotic flavor's decadence describe the honeyed essence,
In between my inner thighs your lips meet mine for taste,
Lifting up towards paradise inside your eyes is effervescence.
Creamy sheets the hottest aphrodisiac,
Vehement you crave my kiss once more a must.
You left not an inch of skin to tease me at
Can you please just stay inside... my heated pelvic thrust?
the sash thrown open
and a warm breeze blowing in
I am in awe of your arousal
so magical
I stand before your naked body
“I” am naked, soul to soul
ready to “breathe” you once again baby
No words are said just flesh to flesh in this steamy place,
Exotic flavor's decadence describe the honeyed essence,
In between my inner thighs your lips meet mine for taste,
Lifting up towards paradise inside your eyes is effervescence.
Creamy sheets the hottest aphrodisiac,
Vehement you crave my kiss once more a must.
You left not an inch of skin to tease me at
Can you please just stay inside... my heated pelvic thrust?
the sash thrown open
and a warm breeze blowing in
I am in awe of your arousal
so magical
I stand before your naked body
“I” am naked, soul to soul
ready to “breathe” you once again baby
15th Jan 2024 6:32am
Realise I may have baffled you. The first two verses I used in quotation were accidentally copied from a comment I made to another writers work. The last verse certainly relates to your poem.
15th Jan 2024 8:21am
the question asked in this terrific write points to the doubt that catches most of us at one point or another. (Shall I no longer exist? (all but a vapor in this most illicit caper) It provides a point that all males can relate to. Great pen as usual.
20th Jan 2024 11:53pm
