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Passionate Surrender
You seize me there,
To take command.
I strive to resist,
Yet cannot withstand.
I transform into your plaything,
A subject of your game.
My entirety lays bare,
Ready for your fervent claim.
To take command.
I strive to resist,
Yet cannot withstand.
I transform into your plaything,
A subject of your game.
My entirety lays bare,
Ready for your fervent claim.
Published 13th Jan 2024
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13th Jan 2024 8:20pm
13th Jan 2024 8:28pm
13th Jan 2024 10:24pm
Eight lines of pure ecstasy, oh, you're good, my poet, and the beautiful part is, your message resonates.
I am wishing you a calm weekend.
I am wishing you a calm weekend.
14th Jan 2024 00:08am
14th Jan 2024 00:11am
Why thank you for the vote of inspiration, however, that is the sacred gifts spilled onto your canvas from your mind, I am just the poetess who sits back and relish in the direction of your universal vision, and you are humbly welcome, always.
