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Fresh Start
In the breeze's embrace, you entered my days,
Wandering into my life, where love lays.
All appears anew, despite life's ceaseless strife,
Your essence, a transformative breath of life.
What is this enchantment that in you thrives,
Animating the mundane, where joy arrives?
No grand alterations, yet a subtle revolution,
You, the elixir, infusing life's evolution.
Your smile, a tender hug, words close and clear,
Love's verses composed, whispers we hold dear.
In the symphony of affections, worth creating,
You, my celestial being, love's soul illuminating.
Wandering into my life, where love lays.
All appears anew, despite life's ceaseless strife,
Your essence, a transformative breath of life.
What is this enchantment that in you thrives,
Animating the mundane, where joy arrives?
No grand alterations, yet a subtle revolution,
You, the elixir, infusing life's evolution.
Your smile, a tender hug, words close and clear,
Love's verses composed, whispers we hold dear.
In the symphony of affections, worth creating,
You, my celestial being, love's soul illuminating.
Published 12th Jan 2024
| Edited 13th Jan 2024
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12th Jan 2024 9:39pm
A very nice composition, my poet, and the metaphors really heightened the words of such a beautiful ink spill.
It's Friday, therefore, please enjoy the remainder of your day and have an uplifting weekend.
It's Friday, therefore, please enjoy the remainder of your day and have an uplifting weekend.
12th Jan 2024 10:10pm
Thank you so much, your feedback continues to provide encouragement to my soul to write more. I am eternally grateful.
12th Jan 2024 10:52pm
Your embracing words have a timeless appeal to them, my poet and no matter what you seem to engage your intellect to place upon your canvas, it is always well received by us poetesses and memorable after the last word has been mentally savored, and you are humbly welcome.
