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Out Of Character-with Faithmairee
Out of character, dark's analysis
a tempest of silence
shadow of ambiguous me
explicable unrestrained, unfed
missing pieces long gone
hiding behind the rainbow's eye
In life's hideous vestibule
tangos dancing in hollow walls
the one thing I own, responsibility
to my mind's Jack in the Box
winding up the main spring
waiting for the welcoming pop
a tempest of silence
shadow of ambiguous me
explicable unrestrained, unfed
missing pieces long gone
hiding behind the rainbow's eye
In life's hideous vestibule
tangos dancing in hollow walls
the one thing I own, responsibility
to my mind's Jack in the Box
winding up the main spring
waiting for the welcoming pop
Published 9th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Once again, Faithmairee saved the poem from obscurity.
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9th Jan 2024 1:37pm
Collaborations have always been my favorite way to write. I think we gave it character.
9th Jan 2024 1:50pm
