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Sweet Love of Mine

In the sands of time, love finds its stay,    
Not a fading flame, but a force to sway.    
   
Hand in hand, our worlds entwine,    
Your lips meet mine, a moment divine.    
   
Closed eyes echo the past and present,    
The magic persists, an enduring crescent.    
   
From the carnival's embrace, our journey took flight,    
A kiss sealed the day and set things right.    
   
Through blooming teens to the present date,    
We've held each other, defying fate.    
   
In every season, each cherished moment,    
Life with you, enchanting and potent.    
   
The spark, the energy, an ever-growing flow,    
Is it God's grace or destiny's glow?    
   
Lost souls, perhaps, for ages untold,    
Uniting now, as destinies unfold.    
   
You, an eternal fire within me, burning slow,    
Gentle yet strong, a radiant, timeless glow.    
   
Flowers bloom, mellowness in their spree,    
As we defy nature's laws, growing brighter, you and me.
Written by PleasingDragon
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Author's Note
In crafting "Sweet Love of Mine," I sought to capture the timeless essence of enduring love. The verses weave through the seasons of life, from the initial sparks of connection to the mature flame that withstands the test of time. It's a poetic journey that explores the magic, energy, and divine nature of a love that continues to grow and illuminate, defying the conventional boundaries set by nature. Much like the blossoming flowers and the eternal flame, this poem celebrates the beauty and resilience found in the sweet journey of love.
- This theme is very similar to Neil Diamond's song - Sweet Caroline; so I added it as well.

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