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Burying Your Doom
As ghastly white rose petals blow
Wind of sweet, musky florals pierce my soul
Lights of time is slowly dimming
Of once were a girl with spirit gleaming
Now pondering
Each step as I go, cold and rippling
It's a lonesome dimension,
With an unyielding cycle of self-imposed detention
Pondering each step as I go, cold and rippling
In bitter solitude, whilst time is fleeting
Must I spend these years to just sit and squander
When there are much left to sip and savor
Stand... and shiver?
When life, is not forever?
A chime
From a distance of heart
Like a symphony from Mozart
Only tragedy forms in gloom...
I must bloom
A new rose, with no doom
A skeptic mind to entomb
Published 8th Jan 2024
| Edited 17th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Sometimes you just have to snap yourself out to live..
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8th Jan 2024 7:34pm
Omg this was beyond beautiful, the depth of thought.
Absolutely amazing!
And the message - so so uplifting
Absolutely amazing!
And the message - so so uplifting
8th Jan 2024 7:39pm
Thanks so much!
It really means so much that you enjoyed my write!!
I really appreciate it!!
<3
It really means so much that you enjoyed my write!!
I really appreciate it!!
<3
8th Jan 2024 7:48pm
8th Jan 2024 9:16pm
I love the way your words encapsulate your feelings looking forward to more
Richard
Richard
9th Jan 2024 1:34am
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9th Jan 2024 3:11am
9th Jan 2024 2:29am
Love the subtle nature of this and the brilliantly creative use of language here. And ending on a question with the perfect antidote to those midnight blues. This sings like a dark song for a soul who seeks the light behind mortality.
John
John
9th Jan 2024 3:15am
Without darkness there is no light...
Sometimes we can get caught up, but I always hope for all to stand again and find light!
Thank you so much! :)
<3
Sometimes we can get caught up, but I always hope for all to stand again and find light!
Thank you so much! :)
<3
9th Jan 2024 11:47am
This was a delight to read. I enjoyed the style and it flowed seamlessly. You captured the emotions well also. Great job.
10th Jan 2024 3:56pm
