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Whispers of Passion: Beautiful Surprise

You were an unfamiliar face,  
Sharing the subway space.  
Your flowing hair and allure,  
Set my senses on a venture.  
 
Our eyes met, no smile from you,  
Serious, yet your gaze was true.  
Amidst the crowded train's embrace,  
I felt shy, lowered my face.  
 
Excitement surged beyond compare,  
Pheromones hinting in the air.  
In the crowd, just us, it felt,  
In your hands my manhood held  
 
I looked up, face turning red,  
You smiled, aware of what was bred.  
A subtle grasp, discreet and sly,  
In that moment, I knew, why!  
 
As your station neared its call,  
You whispered, a silent thrall.  
"Tomorrow, same time, be near,  
If you come, you'll be mine forever dear."
Written by PleasingDragon
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Author's Note
A sudden encounter in the train that will forever remain. My heart was lost with a sudden surprise - who knew what would surmise. What happens next?

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