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Eternal Flame

Gentle you were in your presence � � �
With a molten lava flowing in you � �
Soft caressing was your voice � � �
Who knew what is hidden in you? � �
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The passion of a roaring volcano � � �
The thrust of a gorging waterfall � � �
The sound of thousand temple bells � � �
The crashing waves as they fall � �
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First time we kissed in the Ferris wheel � � �
Your lips were warm and tender � � �
Then I realized your hands were there � �
Feeling me tall and slender � � �
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The night we first were intimate � � �
I was taken aback by your passion � � �
You fought a war with no losers � � �
I surrendered contrary to old fashion � �
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Together we have been for years now � �
Our passion continues to thrive � � �
I wonder what good did I ever do � � �
To deserve someone like you full of life.

Written by PleasingDragon

Published 30th Dec 2023

Author's Note

Avoid forming judgments based solely on appearances when it comes to women. The depth of passion concealed within her heart might be far more profound than what meets the eye.

#feminism #husband #lover #passion

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Re. Eternal Flame

Maple666

30th Dec 2023 12:18pm

I love ❤️ the write ✍️. It�s written with such light touches you really feel it . It�s like painting a picture one brush stroke at a time . Many layers . I love ❤️ that .