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Eternal Flame
Gentle you were in your presence
With a molten lava flowing in you
Soft caressing was your voice
Who knew what is hidden in you?
The passion of a roaring volcano
The thrust of a gorging waterfall
The sound of thousand temple bells
The crashing waves as they fall
First time we kissed in the Ferris wheel
Your lips were warm and tender
Then I realized your hands were there
Feeling me tall and slender
The night we first were intimate
I was taken aback by your passion
You fought a war with no losers
I surrendered contrary to old fashion
Together we have been for years now
Our passion continues to thrive
I wonder what good did I ever do
To deserve someone like you full of life.
With a molten lava flowing in you
Soft caressing was your voice
Who knew what is hidden in you?
The passion of a roaring volcano
The thrust of a gorging waterfall
The sound of thousand temple bells
The crashing waves as they fall
First time we kissed in the Ferris wheel
Your lips were warm and tender
Then I realized your hands were there
Feeling me tall and slender
The night we first were intimate
I was taken aback by your passion
You fought a war with no losers
I surrendered contrary to old fashion
Together we have been for years now
Our passion continues to thrive
I wonder what good did I ever do
To deserve someone like you full of life.
Published 30th Dec 2023
Author's Note
Avoid forming judgments based solely on appearances when it comes to women. The depth of passion concealed within her heart might be far more profound than what meets the eye.
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30th Dec 2023 12:18pm
I love ❤️ the write ✍️. It’s written with such light touches you really feel it . It’s like painting a picture one brush stroke at a time . Many layers . I love ❤️ that .
30th Dec 2023 3:47pm
31st Dec 2023 8:43pm
This is a well throughout out piece. It captures a tender moment vividly. I relate so much to that last line. Thank you for sharing
31st Dec 2023 9:08pm
