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22nd Dec 2023 3:38am
I love it when the meaning is more than the word count. To normalize the act of being underwater, a constriction, a desolate awareness that you cannot survive, you weren’t built to endure life as a fucking fish…
and then you do. And it’s so branded on you that you suck in the fucking fluid and go on.
THAT IS SO DAMN GOOD! UGH! It’s so good.
The apathetic sludge in the narrator’s tone is fucking amazing, especially seasoned with despair. It sucks, and it barely matters because it is what it is.
and then you do. And it’s so branded on you that you suck in the fucking fluid and go on.
THAT IS SO DAMN GOOD! UGH! It’s so good.
The apathetic sludge in the narrator’s tone is fucking amazing, especially seasoned with despair. It sucks, and it barely matters because it is what it is.
22nd Dec 2023 4:04am
22nd Dec 2023 5:39am
Dear N,
This feeling is all too familiar. And that’s if I’m inhaling at all. I find I’m holding my breath more than not. I appreciated the direct simplicity of the subject. Wonderfully written. H🌷
This feeling is all too familiar. And that’s if I’m inhaling at all. I find I’m holding my breath more than not. I appreciated the direct simplicity of the subject. Wonderfully written. H🌷
22nd Dec 2023 11:21am
Been there, currently there & will be drowning again I can guarantee. You described it perfectly.
Anonymous
25th Dec 2023 3:05am
The amazing gift of saying everything in a few short words
