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Slinkys, Life and Love  

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Oh no, not again
as my stomach does another flip
first a little compression, then a weightless feeling
shit, I think I'm going to hurl  
as everything goes topsy-turvy  
holding my head funny,  
my inner ear telling me up is down and down is up
and then the landing again of heavy gravity
spine compressing force flattening the arches of my feet
of fuck, it's such a long way down
such a long, long way to the bottom
by the third step i almost feel human
and on the fifth step i was starting to enjoy the ride  
Wheeeeeee!
the bottom came as a disappointment
static, dull, no movement at all
I think I'll do it again
Written by APissPoorShaman (Ryszard)
Published | Edited 22nd Dec 2023
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