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In Her Girlish Wistful Gaze
In her girlish wistful gaze,
She now laments those fleeting days.
Youth's whispered echos, soft and clear,
Her innocence fades, replaced by fear.
Regret looms like clouds from her past,
Her youthful lust is all that lasts.
She now laments those fleeting days.
Youth's whispered echos, soft and clear,
Her innocence fades, replaced by fear.
Regret looms like clouds from her past,
Her youthful lust is all that lasts.
Published 1st Dec 2023
Author's Note
Edited another photo found from one of our beach vacations when I was in high school.
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1st Dec 2023 3:14pm
Gorgeous picture. Keep that to remind you inspiringly. The title would so aptly caption it. So many young women passing into new adult phases of life could relate to the words..
1st Dec 2023 3:19pm
Oh, those powerful legs and flat tummy. I've lost so much recently but it will be worth it in the end. Thank you for your kind comments.
I won't comment about the tummy, but you can certainly keep what I consider are your athletic legs if you exercise. I took up exercise running when I was 60 four years ago and I like the effect they have had on my own legs, which are anyway used to cycling and walking. (The picture in my present avatar was taken on my first completed 5k run when 62.).
2nd Dec 2023 3:10pm
Yes. I'm walking a lot and jogging a little each morning. Glad that you're staying in shape. Makes living more fun doesn't it.
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2nd Dec 2023 11:59pm
Hot gorgeous pictures and you getting better with age. Keep on writing my sexy lady.
4th Dec 2023 11:41am
