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Intensity

At five in the morning
You grab onto my hand
As though the whole of the universe
Was ending

You whispered in fear
Into my ear
Please hold me and tell me
You need me

So I squeezed you with all the intensity
That I feel in my soul
When I think of your face
And told you I love you

And you said that I ruined it
And now I'm just wondering how
And what
I ruined with my love

It's too much you say
And I think you're crazy
But what I think doesn't matter
Cause we need some time apart

I'll never learn
Written by thinlane
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