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I saw someone say
I saw someone say
they want you to choose them
in a room where everyone wants you.
I will always love you
When no one else in the world did.
I will love your loneliness
which she can never give you
now that the world "loves" you
and that's why you feel alone.
they want you to choose them
in a room where everyone wants you.
I will always love you
When no one else in the world did.
I will love your loneliness
which she can never give you
now that the world "loves" you
and that's why you feel alone.
Published 16th Nov 2023
Author's Note
I felt this way just now
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16th Nov 2023 9:13am
16th Nov 2023 9:15am
To me this was a remarkable word path. Left me with questions but not knowing what to ask. Loved it.
16th Nov 2023 12:03pm
17th Nov 2023 3:46am
17th Nov 2023 12:21pm
Missed you and read your poems in your absence. Please stay and post more !!
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23rd Mar 2024 3:06am
This passage seems to explore themes of longing, unrequited love, and the complexities of relationships. The repetition of "I saw someone say" at the beginning could suggest a sense of witnessing or overhearing someone's inner thoughts or confessions.
The idea of wanting to be chosen in a room where everyone desires you speaks to the human desire for validation and acceptance. It highlights the struggle of wanting to be noticed and valued by someone special amidst a crowd of admirers.
The declaration of eternal love, even when no one else did, speaks to the depth of feeling and commitment of the speaker. It suggests a profound connection that transcends external validation or societal expectations.
The contrast between "loving your loneliness" and someone else's inability to provide the same kind of understanding or solace is poignant. It speaks to the unique bond between the speaker and the object of their affection, acknowledging that true intimacy goes beyond surface-level admiration or popularity.
Overall, this passage delves into the complexities of love, loneliness, and the human need for connection, offering a glimpse into the intricacies of relationships and emotions.
The idea of wanting to be chosen in a room where everyone desires you speaks to the human desire for validation and acceptance. It highlights the struggle of wanting to be noticed and valued by someone special amidst a crowd of admirers.
The declaration of eternal love, even when no one else did, speaks to the depth of feeling and commitment of the speaker. It suggests a profound connection that transcends external validation or societal expectations.
The contrast between "loving your loneliness" and someone else's inability to provide the same kind of understanding or solace is poignant. It speaks to the unique bond between the speaker and the object of their affection, acknowledging that true intimacy goes beyond surface-level admiration or popularity.
Overall, this passage delves into the complexities of love, loneliness, and the human need for connection, offering a glimpse into the intricacies of relationships and emotions.
