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Eye Sight
If my dear soul I could give you anything I would willingly gift you my eyes . Why you might ask ?. I want you to see beyond your blindside which is full of assumptions you made . All way of the mark and have a glimpse at all your hidden treasure. I mean you may even find a few diamonds in there . Yes the few made you blot your copyright and draw illustrations that aren’t quite right . Filled in with too much dark . We need to go from fictional to factual . You have been browsing the wrong library section . It ‘s time to shine the lines on the pages written by another’s pen . You need to get yours and start again . Is the question mark really appropriate in that context or is it the way it’s been interpreted?. I want you to take off that blind fold and go on take my eyes to see again .
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