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DooWopitty LoveSong To.....WooDippaDee
byDanKzkWednApril25,2012at12:34pm
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! yow'wowwie....lay back, layback you
you you oldlonesome babyboy,
[&]pour tha'
blackcaffe d'own yr throatgullething,
ummm, roomtemp unsweeted hazel's'nut[s]
"black as night /black as coal / i wanna see the sun blotted out of..."
myCoffee....wit
Triptet's fine improvi'chaosmusique dancinslow 'in'yr skulldome
&daydreamday'o yr
fic
tition
dreamlove waycross cyber'continentcountry (eXactly 'owFar 'owFar
'owfar is It fr'om Jxnvlle 2 P'ortland?Stockholm? Seattle? Berlin?Bklyn?
Moon? Frisco? Venus?Venice? No-Man's-Land?
wh'ereEver 'owfar, 'owFar?in'deed)
ahh, thee kiss wee'll never have, nor thee comfort of holding
naked f'or eachOther in quietnights un2 quietmournings of
like[ly] never'be......
?'owFar, baby, 'owFar is It ? was It? w'ill It? ----------
XXXXXXXXdkzk25ap2012xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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! yow'wowwie....lay back, layback you
you you oldlonesome babyboy,
[&]pour tha'
blackcaffe d'own yr throatgullething,
ummm, roomtemp unsweeted hazel's'nut[s]
"black as night /black as coal / i wanna see the sun blotted out of..."
myCoffee....wit
Triptet's fine improvi'chaosmusique dancinslow 'in'yr skulldome
&daydreamday'o yr
fic
tition
dreamlove waycross cyber'continentcountry (eXactly 'owFar 'owFar
'owfar is It fr'om Jxnvlle 2 P'ortland?Stockholm? Seattle? Berlin?Bklyn?
Moon? Frisco? Venus?Venice? No-Man's-Land?
wh'ereEver 'owfar, 'owFar?in'deed)
ahh, thee kiss wee'll never have, nor thee comfort of holding
naked f'or eachOther in quietnights un2 quietmournings of
like[ly] never'be......
?'owFar, baby, 'owFar is It ? was It? w'ill It? ----------
XXXXXXXXdkzk25ap2012xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Published 26th Apr 2012
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26th Apr 2012 11:00am
into a currently running competition (even if you don't have one specific person in mind). fantastic getting to the point, and i loved "blackcaffe d'own yr throatgullething". the play on "mournings" added to it as well, though you seem to do that wordplay quite regularly. makes it richer. nice work. [:
26th Apr 2012 3:09pm
thank you, dear...i appreciate yr dropping a line of appreciation.
i just can't get into the 'competition' aspect of anything any more, least of all 'art', but ye can't do EveryThing
Mil Grazie!
i just can't get into the 'competition' aspect of anything any more, least of all 'art', but ye can't do EveryThing
Mil Grazie!
26th Apr 2012 2:29pm
Another nice piece of eccentric wisdom. While access to communication as made the world more connected it has also allowed us avoid the ultimate form of communication, human contact
26th Apr 2012 3:17pm
si, y muchas gracias senor bass.......
Better Connective Avoidence Thru Cybertry [?]
Avoidant Connectivity [?]
faux posi'bilities endless! [?]
Better Connective Avoidence Thru Cybertry [?]
Avoidant Connectivity [?]
faux posi'bilities endless! [?]
26th Apr 2012 5:46pm
I really like this - reminds me of when I first started reading the Beats and they always seemed to be searching for some place. I like how 'd'own' makes that 'd' seem like a swallow...and the idea of 'skulldome' - how something playing out in your own head is like this intangible place you can't really go, much further away than the other side of the world.
26th Apr 2012 9:26pm
merci, Merda........
eye'w'ill 'check you out' soon.....
very cool commentary---thank you
eye'w'ill 'check you out' soon.....
very cool commentary---thank you
