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River Styx
Where you're going
doesn't matter if you
make it back from this
don't matter if it manages to take
your life
in the slightest bit
I'm thinking you knew this
going right into it.
Congratulations.
You've reached Enlightenment.
The river Styx don't pay
The toll comes from your
good Deeds did
Oh my strangest days
And
darkest darkness
Congratulations.
You've reached Enlightenment.
doesn't matter if you
make it back from this
don't matter if it manages to take
your life
in the slightest bit
I'm thinking you knew this
going right into it.
Congratulations.
You've reached Enlightenment.
The river Styx don't pay
The toll comes from your
good Deeds did
Oh my strangest days
And
darkest darkness
Congratulations.
You've reached Enlightenment.
Published 5th Nov 2023
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6th Nov 2023 2:12am
Dear D,
I enjoyed your poem. It allowed me to think about my deeds for today and would did I achieve enlightenment. And I almost said yes until I remembered the driver who cut me off and I cussed his soul 😏
So close…I really appreciated you’d poem. H🌷
I enjoyed your poem. It allowed me to think about my deeds for today and would did I achieve enlightenment. And I almost said yes until I remembered the driver who cut me off and I cussed his soul 😏
So close…I really appreciated you’d poem. H🌷
6th Nov 2023 11:06pm
