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Joyride
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Each brain evolved to try to solve or soothe each pain it fears,
though if a pain is soothed or solved a new pain straight appears,
and some pains solved or soothed can move a woman still to tears --
like when I came in having not been laid in sixty years.
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Each brain evolved to try to solve or soothe each pain it fears,
though if a pain is soothed or solved a new pain straight appears,
and some pains solved or soothed can move a woman still to tears --
like when I came in having not been laid in sixty years.
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Published 30th Oct 2023
Author's Note
Brain, Reason, Facts, Truths, Wisdom, Ethics, and
The Empty Concept of "Joy" -- Merely the Soothing or Solving of Pain
The Empty Concept of "Joy" -- Merely the Soothing or Solving of Pain
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31st Oct 2023 5:33am
Dear J,
I enjoyed the lyrical meter of your poem. The rhyming was great as well. I’ve always found rhyming such a challenge and this was mature and impressive. H🌷
I enjoyed the lyrical meter of your poem. The rhyming was great as well. I’ve always found rhyming such a challenge and this was mature and impressive. H🌷
3rd Nov 2023 8:56pm
I found the ending of this funny. I didn't understand the beginning or the middle but, I found the ending, funny...
