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Made up
Stuck in the rain
with my
make-up
running
and no one can
see
a bit of
the black
because the rain
and the make-up I stain
my eyes with
They're both in my
imagination
with my
make-up
running
and no one can
see
a bit of
the black
because the rain
and the make-up I stain
my eyes with
They're both in my
imagination
Published 29th Oct 2023
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30th Oct 2023 6:51am
Dear DB,
The intensity of this write is only tempered by its brevity. For me, the awareness of having these feelings and the outside world not recognizing them is such a cavernous void. Amazing write. H🌷
The intensity of this write is only tempered by its brevity. For me, the awareness of having these feelings and the outside world not recognizing them is such a cavernous void. Amazing write. H🌷
