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“He was swimming in a sea of other people’s expectations.
Men had drowned in seas like that.”―Robert Jordan
he was a conquerer
of oceans and big lakes.
he had all that it takes:
titanic metaphor!
one day, when eve was red,
he swallowed half the lake—
more than his lungs could take.
the pool became his bed.
© Copyright 2023 October 25
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Men had drowned in seas like that.”―Robert Jordan
he was a conquerer
of oceans and big lakes.
he had all that it takes:
titanic metaphor!
one day, when eve was red,
he swallowed half the lake—
more than his lungs could take.
the pool became his bed.
© Copyright 2023 October 25
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
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