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genie in a bottle...flipside
world at my fingers
struggling to see clearly
it's a sweats & braids kinda day
feeling a little deflated
a bit like vapor
trying to decide
whether to fight
or fade
not committed
to either
do not rub
out of order
Published 22nd Oct 2023
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22nd Oct 2023 1:02pm
Anxiety is a bitch and depression is like gum on the bottom of our shoes at times. You have captured the feeling well, Willow.
31st Oct 2023 9:03pm
23rd Oct 2023 3:29am
Dear WW,
Echo Ahavati. That inability to commit and move forward is so frustrating in days like this. I liked the analogy of “a bit like vapor” unable to grasp the root of it sometimes. Great write. H🌷
Echo Ahavati. That inability to commit and move forward is so frustrating in days like this. I liked the analogy of “a bit like vapor” unable to grasp the root of it sometimes. Great write. H🌷
31st Oct 2023 9:04pm
It's a term my loved ones know well...when I go vapor they know I'm under it. Thank you so much
