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Tried to talk to you

 
 
In the porcelain twilight dark flambé
 
Shouted over all
 
Steered the conversation about you
 
You  
Screamed
Raged
Shouted some more
 
Why?
Is there a point to all this
 
Another log on this here pyre
 
Embers pirouette  
Circling  
The subsiding tide
 
 
Later you asked  
Are you OK  
 
Just be repeating what's already been said
 
Retreated back to silent solitude
Written by Carpe_Noctem
Published
Author's Note
Enjoy the silence

For the flambé comp
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