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bitter vines
i tasted
her flowers
as if
i were
a bee
i found
them growing
wildly
on bitter
vines
in
the closed
garden
of her soul
and
i drank
her poison
now,
i go off
and die
even lonelier
her flowers
as if
i were
a bee
i found
them growing
wildly
on bitter
vines
in
the closed
garden
of her soul
and
i drank
her poison
now,
i go off
and die
even lonelier
Published 5th Oct 2023
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5th Oct 2023 12:00pm
I like this bit of darkness that is emerging in a few of your poems.
I absolutely loved this one.
I absolutely loved this one.
5th Oct 2023 12:07pm
thank you delia, i write the way i feel at that moment, i don't like going there too often, but i guess it has to happen occasionally.
5th Oct 2023 12:10pm
I don't like to think of you in darkened moods, but the writing coming out of it is really good.
You write dark as good as you write light.
You write dark as good as you write light.
5th Oct 2023 12:12pm
