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the dream
the soul says wait the mind says go for it part of me does not know what to do so i loss my soul body and mind in the tune of music and mixing just so i can forget about what my soul wants and my mind seems to live with out someday this soul will move on and then be happy till then the soul on with writes this will wait even into eterety waiting for what might not come inless the dream comes true
Published 23rd Apr 2012
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2012 8:19pm
I am unfamiliar with this style of poem but I get it. To me it relays a fast paced, high thought moment spewed out all at once. Some might suggest grammar, but I think I like the method.
