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orange...
under the
orange moon light
near the
orange light of car,
I was sitting on the
green bed of grass
by holding the
orange petals of flower vase,
suddenly someone touched my
orange wrapped bosoms
through red laser light
to make them look blossoms
in the saffrony night...
when I tried to see his face
he started blowing greyish smoke
and disappeared in the same...
orange moon light
near the
orange light of car,
I was sitting on the
green bed of grass
by holding the
orange petals of flower vase,
suddenly someone touched my
orange wrapped bosoms
through red laser light
to make them look blossoms
in the saffrony night...
when I tried to see his face
he started blowing greyish smoke
and disappeared in the same...
Published 2nd Oct 2023
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14th Oct 2023 2:25pm
(Did you purposely choose to wear an orange shirt in your avatar, when posting this? Or is it irony?)
I really like this poem of yours. It says plenty, very smoothly. All the colors popping, until the bleakness at the end. Making it like a curtain drop after a stage-show.
Really good write, Dimpy.
I really like this poem of yours. It says plenty, very smoothly. All the colors popping, until the bleakness at the end. Making it like a curtain drop after a stage-show.
Really good write, Dimpy.
14th Oct 2023 3:25pm
Hey styxian.. I don't even remember that when this stuff was posted, this was the profile pic or the other one?? You have paid good attention to this matter.. I liked it.. and thank you very much for your kind words and appreciation. .. 💗
