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Oneiros
A slippery mirror
upon which
the eye slides
as chameleon fantasies
bloom like children,
joining every theory
in a tapestry of dirt,
a shallow imitation
of meaning;
casting countless lives
like dandelion seeds
in a void that sings
of identities colliding,
refracting in a din
of opposite rainbows:
the mind chiseled
by the translucent hands
of sleep.
upon which
the eye slides
as chameleon fantasies
bloom like children,
joining every theory
in a tapestry of dirt,
a shallow imitation
of meaning;
casting countless lives
like dandelion seeds
in a void that sings
of identities colliding,
refracting in a din
of opposite rainbows:
the mind chiseled
by the translucent hands
of sleep.
Published 2nd Oct 2023
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10th Oct 2023 4:04am
Very expressive and creative. Almost reminds me of the vanity in what's considered truth and purpose in the world. Seems as though you've a thorough conviction of justice for the immorality of encompassing spiritual decay found in such mentality. I love the imagery and transitions and theme. The words and metaphors used create interesting contrasts and juxtaposition that I relate to. Thanks for sharing!
11th Oct 2023 7:59am
Thank you so much! I want to depict the chaos and strangeness of dreams, where everything seems possible and everything has (possibly) another meaning, or maybe no meaning at all.
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