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Love just lingers.........
It was a winter evening
I came to meet you, my lips quivering
something was on my mind
There was an answer I couldn't find
You looking me straight in my eyes
I looked at you confused and you smiled
First time when I saw you
There was strange feelings inside, feelings which felt new
You came to my life like a sunshine in the winter
Emotions never fading, love just lingers
I came to meet you, my lips quivering
something was on my mind
There was an answer I couldn't find
You looking me straight in my eyes
I looked at you confused and you smiled
First time when I saw you
There was strange feelings inside, feelings which felt new
You came to my life like a sunshine in the winter
Emotions never fading, love just lingers
Published 24th Sep 2023
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24th Sep 2023 11:30pm
so beautiful lovely Saloni I love the ending
makes me think of the song Linger by the cranberries 💕💕
as there is someone that makes me feel like your poem
and that is my song for them....
makes me think of the song Linger by the cranberries 💕💕
as there is someone that makes me feel like your poem
and that is my song for them....
24th Sep 2023 11:40pm
25th Sep 2023 1:54am
Dear S,
I enjoyed its gentleness and innocence. And the surprise element of an unassuming love. Wonderful write. H🌷
I enjoyed its gentleness and innocence. And the surprise element of an unassuming love. Wonderful write. H🌷
26th Sep 2023 6:59pm
