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Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
He never just touched her.
He possessed the coveted cradling embrace.
Cupped her face, to kiss her with a delicate, but
dangerous hunger.
Her heart stricken with an ancient thunder.
A relishing patience.
While languid encapsulated thoughts of him
leak a sensuous silk potion.
Abysmally deep in her veins.
Being with him is erotic insane.
She had no memory of a time before his name.
He drove into her with promise of a million tomorrow's.
Ejecting ecstacy's seeds into her infinite sorrows.
She was left, sweetly and thoroughly devoured.
Remembering eternity at the core of her marrow.
He possessed the coveted cradling embrace.
Cupped her face, to kiss her with a delicate, but
dangerous hunger.
Her heart stricken with an ancient thunder.
A relishing patience.
While languid encapsulated thoughts of him
leak a sensuous silk potion.
Abysmally deep in her veins.
Being with him is erotic insane.
She had no memory of a time before his name.
He drove into her with promise of a million tomorrow's.
Ejecting ecstacy's seeds into her infinite sorrows.
She was left, sweetly and thoroughly devoured.
Remembering eternity at the core of her marrow.
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Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
24th Sep 2023 6:38am
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24th Sep 2023 9:53am
Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
24th Sep 2023 3:11pm
hello beautiful Debbie I love this especially this line...
"Ejecting ecstacy's seeds into her infinite sorrows"
so sexy and seductive 💕
"Ejecting ecstacy's seeds into her infinite sorrows"
so sexy and seductive 💕
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Re: Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
24th Sep 2023 3:18pm
That was my fav line too. Thank you so much for all your support!
Have a beautiful day.
Have a beautiful day.
Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
24th Sep 2023 4:47pm
One can lust for a ham sandwich but it can't spread the mayonnaise. This was good.
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24th Sep 2023 4:48pm
Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
Anonymous
24th Sep 2023 4:53pm
Metaphysical erotica
has always moved my imagination
and this vibe here does
exactly that
'' Her heart stricken with an ancient thunder.
A relishing patience.''
So dope!!
Much respect
Naaj
has always moved my imagination
and this vibe here does
exactly that
'' Her heart stricken with an ancient thunder.
A relishing patience.''
So dope!!
Much respect
Naaj

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Re: Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
24th Sep 2023 5:03pm
Thank you so much for commenting. You always make my day. I like to think of our souls journey is tied to ancient journeys & mysteries. I like to try to push the limits of my imagination. Everyone's encouragement here, seriously has helped me grow as a writer. And that def includes you.
Have a great day! - debbie
Have a great day! - debbie
Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
24th Sep 2023 7:28pm
Oh my…this is deliciously erotic.
“She had no memory of a time before his name”
This jumped right out at me. So damn beautiful.
“She had no memory of a time before his name”
This jumped right out at me. So damn beautiful.
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Re: Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
24th Sep 2023 7:31pm
You make me blush. Thank you.
That line gets me too.
I like escaping to these erotic worlds.
I'm not known for my erotic writing, but I'm trying it out.
That line gets me too.
I like escaping to these erotic worlds.
I'm not known for my erotic writing, but I'm trying it out.
Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
27th Sep 2023 11:06am
"While languid encapsulated thoughts of him
leak a sensuous silk potion."
Love this.
Nicely written, I enjoyed reading.
LJ
leak a sensuous silk potion."
Love this.
Nicely written, I enjoyed reading.
LJ
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Re: Re. Erotic Insane - Remembering Eternity
27th Sep 2023 12:23pm
Oh thank you so much. I liked that word encapsulated, lol. So happy you checked it out.
Have a great day!
Have a great day!