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Lust's Labor's Licked

or
 
Willy in the Rear Room of the Boar's Head Tavern behind Closed Doors
 
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His mistress' eyes of onyx black blank laze,
her lips brick liquorice of venom wet,
her mouth a furnace pitch and grease emblaze,
her throat an ink soot void salts up in sweat;
ere ebon sweeps and prospects tours his tongue,
flicks scarfing Aquitaines of Carménère,
Barolos rich of Tuscanies far-flung,
Riojas bloodstained stored in liquid air;
till rounding oil lagoons in wildwoods thick,
it dives to slate cenote depths earth gold,
and homeward gears on growing hearthstone sick,
to reaches crow inside a wanton cold;
the Devil metal draped enthroned her skin --
full banned from court the licit marriage gin.
 
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Contest: Say It without Saying It -- Sensual Erotica / Metaphorical Style
 
Sponsor: WillowsWhimsies
 
Subject: "The Dark Lady" -- The Mistress of William Shakespeare's Sonnets  
 
Form: Bestial Shakespearean Sonnet
 
Major Poetic Techniques: Metaphors Black / Irony Granite
 
Theme: The Marriage of True Minds Adulterate
Written by Jordan (D.O.C.)
Published | Edited 19th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Brain, Reason, Facts, Truths, Wisdom, Ethics, and
The Philosophical Problem of Knowing the Liar's "Mind"
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