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Psychedelic Rainbows - with PaleSkies
My thoughts are psychedelic rainbows.
Of a tie-dyed pistachio tree.
I lay beneath with my cerulean dreams.
Watching the galaxy arabesque a shooting star.
Infinitely wondering where you are.
Time's persistence is relentless.
In nature's cabaret of a toothsome scent.
Through a backlit gilded mirror of yesterday.
Haunting me with the dripping quill.
Except when it stands frozen with it's ghostly chill.
Of a tie-dyed pistachio tree.
I lay beneath with my cerulean dreams.
Watching the galaxy arabesque a shooting star.
Infinitely wondering where you are.
Time's persistence is relentless.
In nature's cabaret of a toothsome scent.
Through a backlit gilded mirror of yesterday.
Haunting me with the dripping quill.
Except when it stands frozen with it's ghostly chill.
Published 9th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Thank you to my friend PaleSkies for amazing inspiration.
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9th Sep 2023 10:46pm
Thank you for being, a stand alone good writer and letting me be be a part of this poem.
9th Sep 2023 10:51pm
9th Sep 2023 10:48pm
Yeah, pretty far out but an amazing collaboration between you & PaleSkies. I just looked up that Arabesque movement you write of & almost fell on my arse trying to copy it, haha. Love & appreciate the psychedelia here. An original piece from two artists who seem to totally want to break the mold. :-)
9th Sep 2023 10:55pm
You make me laugh. But we appreciate you reading and commenting. I always walk away from your comments with a smile. 😊
I do believe me and PaleSkies are capable of some good ink, he is a pleasure to work with.
Have a great weekend
I do believe me and PaleSkies are capable of some good ink, he is a pleasure to work with.
Have a great weekend
9th Sep 2023 10:59pm
I like what you both have written here. It's original. And this one spoke to me cos it has that realistic escapism trippy vibe to it. (Not that I would know anythang about that, of course) ;-)
9th Sep 2023 11:05pm
10th Sep 2023 3:28pm
Powerful poem with a smooth flow and great lines. I especially love the ending ones although they are all creatively penned. Kudos to you two!!!
10th Sep 2023 3:31pm
11th Sep 2023 1:41am
You have beautifully captured the complexity of human emotions and the passage of time through its vivid and unique imagery. It leaves me with a sense of contemplation and invites me to reflect on my own experiences of longing and nostalgia.
11th Sep 2023 1:48am
Thank you so much from us both. I'm so glad it resonated with you. We have a unique way of composing some of our collaborations and it's wonderful to hear someone was moved.
Have a great night, thx for stopping bye
Have a great night, thx for stopping bye
