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Sum of Sun
Eyes comprised
Of
That which
The sights were comprised
* * *
Painted skies/painted by the sum of the sun
* * *
Where you
Watched
Everyone walk into the sun
Of
That which
The sights were comprised
* * *
Painted skies/painted by the sum of the sun
* * *
Where you
Watched
Everyone walk into the sun
Published 26th Aug 2023
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26th Aug 2023 5:41am
“Sum of Sun” made me think of Son of Sam haha. The last verse is good, has a nice metaphorical quality to it.
