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This Can/t Be Life/Love
Some of them
rats,
they are jumping
ship;
* * *
While others,
* * *
They are looking for the cheese.
Who could
ever believe
that this
could be us
Not US
rats,
they are jumping
ship;
* * *
While others,
* * *
They are looking for the cheese.
Who could
ever believe
that this
could be us
Not US
Published 9th Aug 2023
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9th Aug 2023 7:38am
Dear CO,
I saw quite the metaphor of human behavior and their response to love. It’s all so singular and yet the same sometimes. You paint a vivid picture with your words I know I’ll always find some fabulously cool hidden meaning.
Gem of a write. H🌷
I saw quite the metaphor of human behavior and their response to love. It’s all so singular and yet the same sometimes. You paint a vivid picture with your words I know I’ll always find some fabulously cool hidden meaning.
Gem of a write. H🌷
9th Aug 2023 11:35am
9th Aug 2023 5:49pm
Do rats see themselves as rats or as some noble creature scurrying about their lives, or do they just stop at the first smelly cheese they find? Good write.
