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Never To Be

lust desires to be
that which love will always be
lust can never be

Written by LIFE4ME

Published 8th Aug 2023

#haiku #love #spiritual

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Re. Never To Be

8th Aug 2023 4:22pm

And these two shall never meet..............

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Re. Never To Be

8th Aug 2023 4:28pm

AMEN! I like that!...if I had continued the haiku, that'd be a great line to go with the poem :)

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Re. Never To Be

29th Nov 2023 8:25pm

A true and poignant senryu.
Nicely done.

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30th Nov 2023 4:24pm

thank you :)

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