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Horse/Carriage
You will
set each
other on
Fire
* * *
Re-enforcing
The dark side
Of the force
On your
Course
Of
* * *
Love/Marriage/Divorce
set each
other on
Fire
* * *
Re-enforcing
The dark side
Of the force
On your
Course
Of
* * *
Love/Marriage/Divorce
Published 7th Aug 2023
| Edited 9th Aug 2023
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8th Aug 2023 8:21am
The rhyme of “course” and “divorce” works well. “Reinforcing” is spelt thus, unless you were going for a particular effect with that misspelling, of course.
9th Aug 2023 12:02pm
