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Glow
You
The sun's setting
Twilight's heaven
The blue of your eyes
The caress of the evening breeze
Your hair soft falling
Words
Felt more than heard
Whisper close
Sweet nothings
Meaning everything
Kisses
Tender at first
Tracing your lips and your face
Wanting more
A flutter of wings
Then birdsong nearby
Lost in your eyes
In nature's stirring
You
Who I never knew
But always was knowing
Learning love anew
A touch at a time
So familiar with you
Tasting a deeper real
And again
Sweet wine
Shadows
Lost to the dusk
As I in your arms
Time strays
In the dream time of the heart
Breathing poetry
In the waking of stars
And the warmth of your glow
The sun's setting
Twilight's heaven
The blue of your eyes
The caress of the evening breeze
Your hair soft falling
Words
Felt more than heard
Whisper close
Sweet nothings
Meaning everything
Kisses
Tender at first
Tracing your lips and your face
Wanting more
A flutter of wings
Then birdsong nearby
Lost in your eyes
In nature's stirring
You
Who I never knew
But always was knowing
Learning love anew
A touch at a time
So familiar with you
Tasting a deeper real
And again
Sweet wine
Shadows
Lost to the dusk
As I in your arms
Time strays
In the dream time of the heart
Breathing poetry
In the waking of stars
And the warmth of your glow
Published 5th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Savage Garden - Truly Madly Deeply @ https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=WQnAxOQxQIU&pp=ygUSdHJ1bHkgbWFkbHkgZGVlcGx5
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Love your song choice almost as much as I do this romantic gem of a poem.
Your pen is uniquely equipped to tap into all that my heart has ever desired when it comes to love and romance; from what I've learned, yearned for and created from fantasy, it's like a switch is flipped and I'm riveted by your gorgeous phrasing and word choices. Such a hopeless romantic, am I... that I was seemingly born to breathe poetry in the waking of stars, as well...
Very much enjoyed the essence of falling in love and how that weightlessness makes you feel invincible.
You're an amazing writer and I derive such wonderfulinspiration from your work in so many ways.
Thank you for sharing yourself and your incredible ink.
-💙
Your pen is uniquely equipped to tap into all that my heart has ever desired when it comes to love and romance; from what I've learned, yearned for and created from fantasy, it's like a switch is flipped and I'm riveted by your gorgeous phrasing and word choices. Such a hopeless romantic, am I... that I was seemingly born to breathe poetry in the waking of stars, as well...
Very much enjoyed the essence of falling in love and how that weightlessness makes you feel invincible.
You're an amazing writer and I derive such wonderfulinspiration from your work in so many ways.
Thank you for sharing yourself and your incredible ink.
-💙
I bring the soft and your words bring the fire of love. And mutual admiration is better than envy, especially for hopeless romantics like us.
Love though, has its own sense of time, yet love comes.
Thank you for always uplifting me, S. 🌼💙
Love though, has its own sense of time, yet love comes.
Thank you for always uplifting me, S. 🌼💙
7th Aug 2023 6:07am
Dear AJ,
I totally see it from your perspective but from mine…he was 6’5”, brown eyed and a head of curls…🫠
Makes the heart go pitter patter and then melt.
Truly enjoyed this poem of love and appreciation of what’s been given from the heart. Lovely piece. H🌷
I totally see it from your perspective but from mine…he was 6’5”, brown eyed and a head of curls…🫠
Makes the heart go pitter patter and then melt.
Truly enjoyed this poem of love and appreciation of what’s been given from the heart. Lovely piece. H🌷
7th Aug 2023 8:30am
Hmm...I'm only 6'2" my eyes are hazel and my hair is wavy...😢
Thank you for telling me so I won't always be wondering, "What if." 🌼😁
Thank you for telling me so I won't always be wondering, "What if." 🌼😁
7th Aug 2023 10:02pm
Nooooo. You read it wrong. It actually says he was 6’2” with hazel eyes and wavy hair. Damn auto correct. 😉
7th Aug 2023 11:03pm
Thank you for trying to soften the blow...you can go ahead and call 911 now 🙄😋🌼
