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Idle
Ideology:
Obedient
stars
offering
guidance
the sun,
the moon,
the clouds.
Karmas honesty
inspires
a
better
life,
I just want
to
make
people
proud.
Ideology:
Let people factor in the same as above but from bed.
Published 13th Feb 2010
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13th Feb 2010 9:43pm
The way single words are revealed, using that structre, is great. Make is so every word means something important. I especially like the waterfall structure of that bit where you talk about making people proud. I really like this.
12th Aug 2013 6:35am
