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Edifice
Allow me
to carve
into this boulders
figures not of you
but of our love
transcended
from the memories
we've shared
for one day,
My mind
shall fail
to remember
yet this
monumental piece
shall boast
of how I've lived
as i am loving you
wholly
soulfully
Eternally
for eternity
to carve
into this boulders
figures not of you
but of our love
transcended
from the memories
we've shared
for one day,
My mind
shall fail
to remember
yet this
monumental piece
shall boast
of how I've lived
as i am loving you
wholly
soulfully
Eternally
for eternity
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Re. Edifice
1st Aug 2023 10:59pm
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1st Aug 2023 11:09pm
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1st Aug 2023 11:11pm
Peculiar taste, huh? I like peculiar. It's what makes Billy tick, haha. And a very good morning to you also. :-)
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1st Aug 2023 11:48pm
Its been raining back here. Typhoons and monsoons were hitting left and right. How have u been?
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1st Aug 2023 11:56pm
Lol, although it's not funny! Didn't you say there were raging typhoons where you are, the last time we spoke? I think you did. It's been raining here a lot lately & temperatures are down on the average but I'm thankful because of what I have been hearing about parts of USA & Europe with +50oC temps last week. It's no joke. In fact, it's scary. I'm doing ok, thank you.
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2nd Aug 2023 00:42am
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2nd Aug 2023 00:52am
As long as it doesn't get too hot where you are, right? I'm ok with anything up to 25oC/77F. I've seen what's been happening in China yesterday with the torrent of water rushing through flooded rivers in the centre of towns there. Don't wanna get too political but can't see how I can avoid it really. China & USA are 2 of the biggest polluters in the world. I like the idea of carbon capture, I must admit. That's where you take smoke from oil & gas but somehow suck it up & put it underground for energy use at a later stage. I'm laughing cos why aren't we already seeing the benefits of that?!
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Re. Edifice
21st Oct 2023 5:03am
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21st Oct 2023 7:44am
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21st Oct 2023 8:24am
I guess that depends on what kind of love someone is looking for and where they are looking for this love at. But yes, I wish finding a love like
that is something that everyone had.
that is something that everyone had.
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22nd Oct 2023 12:36pm
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22nd Oct 2023 6:35pm
Thank you for you well wishes but I have had that kind of love for many year now.
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23rd Oct 2023 1:25am