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Astro-Quantum-Poetist
Gaze the stature of a maze.
* * *
Seeing into the being of being.
Being into the seeing of seeing.
Delved departures of the deep.
Razor blade-made promises
I
shall
keep.
Forever thus, walking on the water of darkness.
* * *
The mercury of the night/mercury of the sight
Sighted in the site
Knighted
In
The night
* * *
Seeing into the being of being.
Being into the seeing of seeing.
Delved departures of the deep.
Razor blade-made promises
I
shall
keep.
Forever thus, walking on the water of darkness.
* * *
The mercury of the night/mercury of the sight
Sighted in the site
Knighted
In
The night
Published 30th Jul 2023
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30th Jul 2023 12:44pm
1st Aug 2023 7:17am
30th Jul 2023 2:24pm
Very clever Lots of great lines. My fave is "walking on the water of darkness."
1st Aug 2023 7:18am
30th Jul 2023 8:10pm
Although the narrative isn’t clear the poem has strong, evocative imagery and so creates a sense of mysticism that makes it a pleasurable read.
1st Aug 2023 7:19am
