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My Friend's Orgasm

Her eyes held what must have been  
the most earnest expression of joy  
shown over the course of her life.  
 
Was she finding feelings never known  
or experiencing the familiar more deeply?  
 
What mysteries channeled through her  
young body in those moments? Did her eyes  
give hints to new paths being forged?  
 
What thoughts raced through her mind as  
she clung to him, doggedly pressing again  
and again, even after his face revealed that  
he was fully spent.
Written by Nizana (Lauryn)
Published | Edited 9th Aug 2023
Author's Note
I woke from a strange dream this morning. In the dream I was watching my friend from high school having sex. Maybe being invited to be a bride's maid in her wedding, now eight years later, prompted this memory. I hope they're happy together.
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