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Hole
To all of you I am just a hole
A thing with no soul
Nothing underneath
No deep feelings beneath
A place to put your dick
Just a simple trick
Don't worry about me
There is nothing else to see
7/18/23
A thing with no soul
Nothing underneath
No deep feelings beneath
A place to put your dick
Just a simple trick
Don't worry about me
There is nothing else to see
7/18/23
Published 18th Jul 2023
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19th Jul 2023 00:17am
Very raw personal expose - the world can be cruel. We all can use shade (friends & family) or we get burned. That feeling of being used or taken advantage of stings and can certainly scar. Based on this poem, CeCe I think you recognize the difference between a supporter and a user. May you have the strength and conviction to deny the users.
Hole - more like an opening to your poetry, thoughts, self and your being. No dicks allowed unless invited.
Hole - more like an opening to your poetry, thoughts, self and your being. No dicks allowed unless invited.
20th Jul 2023 8:43pm
21st Jul 2023 3:55pm
26th Jul 2023 10:45am
Looking back at your comment and just wanted to say...
Yeah, you tapped right into that feeling of being used that was behind the emotion when I wrote this. It was a bad day, bad combination of things and turned into a really bad night after I wrote this and walked to a bar. Yikes.
I have trouble seeing who the users are until it's too late I think? I try to. But seem to fail a lot.
Yeah, you tapped right into that feeling of being used that was behind the emotion when I wrote this. It was a bad day, bad combination of things and turned into a really bad night after I wrote this and walked to a bar. Yikes.
I have trouble seeing who the users are until it's too late I think? I try to. But seem to fail a lot.
24th Jul 2023 11:55am
You are poetess and talented with words and truth
and i like your style..happiness !!!
and i like your style..happiness !!!
26th Jul 2023 10:36am
24th Jul 2023 7:14pm
26th Jul 2023 10:38am
I appreciate the comment. Yeah, there is a lot more to read between these simple lines.
31st Jul 2023 00:33am
