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The Stars Know Why
Stars, the tinsel of the night.
The stars know all of our secrets,
glistening with a slight conceit.
Our wishes journey from our heartland,
depart our yearning mind
to land upon the black terrain of midnight.
Diamonds of hope scatter their shiny shards.
Those that tred the world alone search
for the reasons we persist to exist.
They say look above, far and wide.
Ancient wisdoms gone dark thread the fibers
of the blanket of black sky.
Sparkling silent with the magic power of our every last why.
The stars know all of our secrets,
glistening with a slight conceit.
Our wishes journey from our heartland,
depart our yearning mind
to land upon the black terrain of midnight.
Diamonds of hope scatter their shiny shards.
Those that tred the world alone search
for the reasons we persist to exist.
They say look above, far and wide.
Ancient wisdoms gone dark thread the fibers
of the blanket of black sky.
Sparkling silent with the magic power of our every last why.
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Re. The Stars Know Why
3rd Jul 2023 1:53pm
I enjoy your words and know that you are striving to be published. Never give up your dream.
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3rd Jul 2023 2:04pm
Ok trying to make me cry ( good tears) first thing in the morning. You have no idea how much what you said means to me. 💜
Re. The Stars Know Why
3rd Jul 2023 2:10pm
I think this is one of the best poems of yours that I have read... "tinsel of the night" is just poetic gold... excellent write from start to finish...
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Re: Re. The Stars Know Why
3rd Jul 2023 2:21pm
What a nice compliment! Thank you so much.
Tinsel - guess I got Xmas on the brain, lol.
I appreciate your opinion so much Lil, 💜
Tinsel - guess I got Xmas on the brain, lol.
I appreciate your opinion so much Lil, 💜
Re. The Stars Know Why
3rd Jul 2023 5:12pm
This was excellent. As I read the words I had a very distinct image in my mind that fit this work. Great stuff
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3rd Jul 2023 5:35pm
Re. The Stars Know Why
3rd Jul 2023 6:00pm
Hello Debbie😊
You got me at the title.
This write is so captivating. You express yourself eloquently.
Love this.
You got me at the title.
This write is so captivating. You express yourself eloquently.
Love this.
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Re. The Stars Know Why
7th Jul 2023 2:43am
The stars like to tease us, that's for sure; knowing we can never touch them!
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Re: Re. The Stars Know Why
21st Nov 2023 10:16am
Thank you so very much for that encouragement. I'm working on a manuscript for publication. You made my morning, so thank you again. Glad you enjoyed!